GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION

GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION


You are latter-day RobinsonCrusoe. You are stranded on a desert island. It´s been ten days since you got shipwrecked and you start losing hope of being rescued. In order to keep track of time you decide to write a diary.Your diary will be in the format of a blog. In groups of 3 to 4 students. You have to write your impressions of your life on the island, making an account of your daily activities. For such, we will be visiting the school´s cyber room every now and then: once to start the blog (choosing a name, writing an introduction, presenting yourself, giving background information to the creation of the blog); a couple of times to add information to it, and one last time to read your mates´blogs and write comments on them. Pictures are highly welcome. Be creative. You can add ideas but cannot change the factual information in the story.



Turma 83 Grupo 6


 
 Robinson Crusoe    My name is Robinson Crusoe, a man that lived in york in England, my family was middle class, and very religious. My parents wanted me to became a merchant, but I loved the sea and wanted to become a sailor. So my father one day called me to talk and told to me that if I went to the sea God would never help me.
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 I thougt and then I decided to went to sea.
    Thanks to my friend that I met in Hull, I did my first voyage to London, Somedays has passed and I strongstorm attack us. I think that I was die, but the ship got stuck in the sand and anybody dies. then I decided to go to london. In that city a met a captain of a ship which was going to africa and he call me to go with him.
      In that voyage I was captured by pirates because I was a very good fisherman.Then I have been rescued by a ship that was going to Brazil.
      In Brazil, I worked in a sugar plantation, so I and many others planters decided to go to Africa because we needed slaves. In that voyage they were afraid of drowing and of being captured. The ship sank.I was so sad when it sank because I remember my father's words.I was the only surviver, I found the ship destroyed and come back to it to look for some useful things.
I  found many things to do a raft.I build a hut in the shore of the island in the hope of see another ship. 
I put up a peace of wood to make the days in the island, I planted corn and rice near my hut.I decided to read the bible because I wanted that god fogive me






I tryed make bread than I need ingredients and I thought that pots were the best choice than I need corn and fire.
I was  thinking of a way to escape of  this island and i make a canoe myself but a storm get away it.


To have food,sink,milk and gunpowder.
one day I staied very frightened because I saw footprint . I do a second enclosure to make myself safe . some days before I saw canibals eat other people. I keep power gun in the cave that I found they,for be sure that I would stay safe.


One day I saw a spanish ship,that gives me hope that I could escape from the island but the ship didn`t see me.Now my idea to make my dream real is get a servant to help me to escape from this terrible island.
One day the cannibals did a ceremony to eat another member of his village and I saw an oportunity to get my servant.I save he shooting at the other cannibals.The man put my foot on his head,i think that this meant that he was eternelly grateful.I do he my friend.I call him friday because it was the day that I met him.In a few days he knew speak my language. I talk about God with him but he doesn`t believe and we argued.
            
I asked to Friday if he want to back to his village but he didn`t  want because  he was afraid that his people kill me.We stayed.


One night cannibals invaded the island, We killed they because we were afraid that they could eat us.
     

A lot of men come out of the ship because we thought that some more men from the ship would probably come looking for the others soon.I managed stop the people and did they not go to the boat doing a hole in the bottom and took everything out of the ship.The captain told me that I was recaptured his ship and if he took back

 


I was safe then I gave my money to the captain who saved my life.
I was in portugal but I went to England by land because I had a bad feeling if I went by ship. In that voyage I nearly die by wolves that went ate me.

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