GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION

GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION


You are latter-day RobinsonCrusoe. You are stranded on a desert island. It´s been ten days since you got shipwrecked and you start losing hope of being rescued. In order to keep track of time you decide to write a diary.Your diary will be in the format of a blog. In groups of 3 to 4 students. You have to write your impressions of your life on the island, making an account of your daily activities. For such, we will be visiting the school´s cyber room every now and then: once to start the blog (choosing a name, writing an introduction, presenting yourself, giving background information to the creation of the blog); a couple of times to add information to it, and one last time to read your mates´blogs and write comments on them. Pictures are highly welcome. Be creative. You can add ideas but cannot change the factual information in the story.



Turma 83 Grupo 3

I am Robinson Crusoe I was born in England in the city Called York.My father is a merchant,I had two older brothers, one become a soldier,and he was killed in France, and the other one nobody knows what happened to him.I had a good education.I went to a good school,but I always wanted to go to sea however my father never accepted it.Without my parents permission I ran away home.(06/10/2010)


One day I met a friend in the city of Hull and his father owned a ship that  was going to London so I went with them.

My first day were terrible and i remenbered that i promise to myself thait if god let me live i will come back home.The next morming i saw the sun shinning and it was beautiful,after that i decided to keep traveling around the sea.

After some days a terrible storm attacked us,so we had to get out of the ship.After the storm was finishing and another ship came close of us.We entered into that ship while our ship was going down on the sea.
(06/10/10)




Chapters 4,5,6,7


At the beginig of the day, I saw, very scared,a broken ship near the shore.I went there and got some stuffs for me.I caught food, guns,clothes, gun power and etc. After that a build a hut for me. I built it near to a hill.I made a raft for put and transporte the things i caught in the ship. Next morning i put my affairs in a cave.I found some goasts, and i cooked them. After all this, chose a piece of wood and wrote on it : 30th of september( the day i arrived in the island).


months later I improved my cabin and saw that near the hut was growing planting of rice and corn.Had an earthquake on the island and a few days later I found a turtle which iate.Hereafter some time after the earthquake I was sick and decided to do medicine of rum and tabacco.I started to read the bible because God let me live.I was felling well i returned to started the island.


 

Chapter 8 & 9

I have lived on this island for a long time, I arrived in 1670, and now realize that I'm with a few bullets, then I'd have to tame goats because after that I’ll kill them without shooting with my gun.In the next morning I was walking on the beach and suddenly i got scared because I saw a footprint, and looked like a footprint of a human being.The  footprint was not mine it was too big to be mine. I build another wall in my hut to be more protected. In 1676 I saw a lot of hands arms and legs lying loose in the sand. I was really worried because i thought were cannibals.
I found a cave an there maybe was some gold,anyway i put my guns and gunpowers in there.
One day i saw that a ship crashed in the shore and i realized that all the peoples died,so after that i really wanted to get out of this island.So i ran away fo the island with my canoe and the currets were very strong and i thanked god that i almost died in the sea but i didn't, then when the sea calm down i came back  to the island. 



Chapter 10


            Now i have a friend in the island, and i will call him Friday, he had a good face and looks like a good person. He was grateful for i save his life and he will call me of master.After he came with me to the top of the hill i wanted to see if the cannibals had gone.

I could see where th cannibals were, and they had gone so i take Friday with me and i made him pick everything up and burn it, he understood me. After i came back to my hut with Friday, i gave him some clothes and build a tent for him to protect me at night.

Friday was honest and a good men. I began teach him many things. He learned to speak with me he learned so quickly and he was liking and me too. My life was improve since the day i save him, he was a very good company for me.

I will kill a goat with my gun for me and Friday, when i shooted the goat he stayed terrified, he was scared of me he tough i will kill him, i could see that. But i told him i won’t kill him, but when i shooted the parrot and it fall down he stayed crazy, terrified again.when we back i made the dinner and he liked the goat which i cooked.

Friday was speaking englis very well. I started to make some questions for him and he said we could get out the island with a canoe, after that i started to hope that Friday would one day helpme to escape from the island.




Chapter 11


One day, me and Friday were on the top of the Hill on the east side of the island when Friday started to jump and dance,happily,he saw the mainland, his land, his country.When i said that i wiil made him a canoe to he go home he offered me to go with he.   
I made a big canoe to cary us to the mainland.But one day Friday saw six canoes on the shore.I took my guns and climbed up the hill.From there i saw twenty one canibals and three prisoners.Me and Friday came a little more closer and we saw the cannibals eating a prisoner.When i saw it i took my gun and gave one to Friday.We killed some cannibals and others ran away.While Friday was trying to kill others cannibals i was saving the poor prisoner.The most cannibals dieded but someones has escaped.I tried to follow the cannibals and when i jumped to a canoe,there was a men on the canoe.When Friday saw the face of the man he began to cry.The man was his father.
Chapter 12


I was walking with Friday on the beach when i noticed that there were 30 cannibals, with a spanish prisoner. We started to play a game, the winner was who ever killed the most cannibals. He won! And we eventually were able to save the prisoner.



Chapter 14


I came back to England in June 1867.I have been away for thirty –five years.

My parents were dead.I decided to go to Lisbon to find out about my plantation in Brazil.There i find the portuguese sea captain that saved me from the cost of Africa.He told that my plantation has done well.I wrote letters to the people who have looking after my plantation and they send all the money the plantation had made.I was a rich men.
I send some money for all the people who had help me.Then i decided to go back to England.But i didn´t want to travel by the sea so i went by land.I came back with Friday and others servants.I had many adventures
When i arrived back to Englandi decided to sell my plantation.I got married and had two sons and a daughter.Then my wife died. I visited my old island and saw that the spanish men had now taken over the island, I stayed there for 20 days. I help the people on the island.Then much more things happens on the island .
I decided that  one day i iil write my history.



 while I was walking down the beach I got scared because there was a footprint in the sand. so I started running to my hut because I was nervous , I thought it was a footprint canibal.and i was afraid for a good time.While  these weeks just keep thinking about these cannibals. I prayed  to keep me confident and encouraged. so I went back to explore the island. after some years I realized that I was very lonely and I could not stand all alone. was in a storm that I saw a ship and I went for it and saw two dead men.I found also food, gunpowder, drink and money near the wreckage. One day that I dreamed that I saved a cannibal I actually saw more than 3 over 30 canoes and cannibals with a prisone

Chapters 1 to 14


I am Robinson Crusoe I was born in England in the city Called York.My father is a merchant,I had two older brothers, one become a soldier,and he was killed in France, and the other one nobody knows what happened to him.I had a good education.I went to a good school,but I always wanted to go to sea however my father never accepted it.Without my parents permission I ran away home. One day I met a friend in the city of Hull and his father owned a ship that  was going to London so I went with them.

My first day were terrible and i remenbered that i promise to myself thait if god let me live i will come back home.The next morming i saw the sun shinning and it was beautiful,after that i decided to keep traveling around the sea.

After some days a terrible storm attacked us,so we had to get out of the ship.After the storm was finishing and another ship came close of us.We entered into that ship while our ship was going down on the sea.


At the beginig of the day, I saw, very scared,a broken ship near the shore.I went there and got some stuffs for me.I caught food, guns,clothes, gun power and etc. After that a build a hut for me. I built it near to a hill.I made a raft for put and transporte the things i caught in the ship. Next morning i put my affairs in a cave.I found some goasts, and i cooked them. After all this, chose a piece of wood and wrote on it : 30th of september( the day i arrived in the island).


months later I improved my cabin and saw that near the hut was growing planting of rice and corn.Had an earthquake on the island and a few days later I found a turtle which iate.Hereafter some time after the earthquake I was sick and decided to do medicine of rum and tabacco.I started to read the bible because God let me live.I was felling well i returned to started the island.
I have lived on this island for a long time, I arrived in 1670, and now realize that I'm with a few bullets, then I'd have to tame goats because after that I’ll kill them without shooting with my gun.In the next morning I was walking on the beach and suddenly i got scared because I saw a footprint, and looked like a footprint of a human being.The  footprint was not mine it was too big to be mine. I build another wall in my hut to be more protected. In 1676 I saw a lot of hands arms and legs lying loose in the sand. I was really worried because i thought were cannibals.
I found a cave an there maybe was some gold,anyway i put my guns and gunpowers in there.
One day i saw that a ship crashed in the shore and i realized that all the peoples died,so after that i really wanted to get out of this island.So i ran away fo the island with my canoe and the currets were very strong and i thanked god that i almost died in the sea but i didn't, then when the sea calm down i came back  to the island






Now i have a friend in the island, and i will call him Friday, he had a good face and looks like a good person. He was grateful for i save his life and he will call me of master.After he came with me to the top of the hill i wanted to see if the cannibals had gone.

I could see where th cannibals were, and they had gone so i take Friday with me and i made him pick everything up and burn it, he understood me. After i came back to my hut with Friday, i gave him some clothes and build a tent for him to protect me at night.

Friday was honest and a good men. I began teach him many things. He learned to speak with me he learned so quickly and he was liking and me too. My life was improve since the day i save him, he was a very good company for me.

I will kill a goat with my gun for me and Friday, when i shooted the goat he stayed terrified, he was scared of me he tough i will kill him, i could see that. But i told him i won’t kill him, but when i shooted the parrot and it fall down he stayed crazy, terrified again.when we back i made the dinner and he liked the goat which i cooked.

Friday was speaking englis very well. I started to make some questions for him and he said we could get out the island with a canoe, after that i started to hope that Friday would one day helpme to escape from the island.
One day, me and Friday were on the top of the Hill on the east side of the island when Friday started to jump and dance,happily,he saw the mainland, his land, his country.When i said that i wiil made him a canoe to he go home he offered me to go with he.   
I made a big canoe to cary us to the mainland.But one day Friday saw six canoes on the shore.I took my guns and climbed up the hill.From there i saw twenty one canibals and three prisoners.Me and Friday came a little more closer and we saw the cannibals eating a prisoner.When i saw it i took my gun and gave one to Friday.We killed some cannibals and others ran away.While Friday was trying to kill others cannibals i was saving the poor prisoner.The most cannibals dieded but someones has escaped.I tried to follow the cannibals and when i jumped to a canoe,there was a men on the canoe.When Friday saw the face of the man he began to cry.The man was his father.

I came back to England in June 1867.I have been away for thirty –five years.

My parents were dead.I decided to go to Lisbon to find out about my plantation in Brazil.There i find the portuguese sea captain that saved me from the cost of Africa.He told that my plantation has done well.I wrote letters to the people who have looking after my plantation and they send all the money the plantation had made.I was a rich men.
I send some money for all the people who had help me.Then i decided to go back to England.But i didn´t want to travel by the sea so i went by land.I came back with Friday and others servants.I had many adventures
When i arrived back to Englandi decided to sell my plantation.I got married and had two sons and a daughter.Then my wife died. I visited my old island and saw that the spanish men had now taken over the island, I stayed there for 20 days. I help the people on the island.Then much more things happens on the island .
I decided that  one day i will write my history.

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